【求生技能】【人与自然:雪中救援】

大雨续写作文(读后续写下水作文)(1)

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On Sunday, Nicholas, a teenager, went skiing with his father at Sugarloaf Mountain in Maine.

They had a wonderful day and decided to drive home to Massachusetts after a final run. They took a chairlift to the top of the mountain, where they split up to go down in different trails. When the father finished his run, he headed to the parking lot to wait for his son. However, Nicholas never showed up.

It turned out that a fierce snowstorm had swept into the area as Nicholas was on his way down. Unable to see far, he accidentally turned off the path and ventured down the west side of the mountain. Before he knew it, Nicholas was lost and all alone. His way back to the ski trails was blocked. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies. The sun began to sink and he was getting colder by the minute.

Nicholas had no idea where he was. He tried not to panic. He thought about Bear Grylls' survival show Man vs. Wild that he used to watch on TV. In the show, Grylls is abandoned in a wild area and has to help himself out. It was time to put the tips he had learned to use.

He decided to stop moving around. He needed the energy, and the winds weren't as strong in the valley where he stood as they were up on the mountain. Plus, there was a better chance of someone finding him if he stayed put. The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. Using his skis, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.

When evening came, Nicholas was really hungry. He ate some snow and drank some water from nearby stream so that he wouldn't dehydrate (脱水)。 Then he returned to his cave and slept.

Paragraph 1:

When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph 2:

The next day,Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作指导】

Para 1. 素材速记

Be overwhelmed with panic his face became paled at a loss about what to to

Faint down on the ground

Feel a little relief at the thought of his son’s acquiring substantial survival sills

Have confidence on his son rack one’s brain and wrestle with the issue

It abruptly dawned on him that

Call the emergency center for help

Struggle through the snow and seek for the tracks of his missing son

Para 2. 素材速记

Feel himself almost on the edge of being saved be wild with joy

Struggle to his feet with his glowing eyes and a broad smile he couldn’t restrain

Push the piled branches aside squeeze and creep out of the hole

Yell in a weak and hoarse voice wag a long branch with a red ribbon tightly fastened to it

Fortunately, was spotted and rushed to the snowmobile

Tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes Take into his arms express sincere gratitude feel a sense of pride

【下水作文】

When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. Overwhelmed with panic, he fainted

on the ground, his face becoming paled. He was at a loss what to do. Suddenly, at the thought of the fact that his son might acquire substantial survival skills by watching concerned TV programme, he felt a little relieved and he racked his brain to wrestle with the challenge he met with. It abruptly dawned on him that he should call the emergency center for help and meanwhile he could struggle through snow and seek for the tracks of his missing son. And he hurriedly implemented his plan.

The next day,Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He became wild with joy, feeling himself almost on the edge of being saved. With his glowing eyes and a broad smile he couldn’t restrain, he pushed aside the piled branches surrounding himself, and squeezed out of the narrow hole. He yelled in a weak and hoarse voice, but nobody heard him. Then he waged a long branch with a red ribbon tightly fastened to it. Fortunately, he was spotted this time and rushed to the snowmobile with a warm and comfortable shelter. He took the rescuers into his arms, including his dad, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. His father patted him on the shoulder, murmuring with pride that it was love and perseverance, and rather knowledge about survival skills that made great sense in our lives.

【参考范文】

When Nicholas didn't show up, his father realized there must be something wrong. The father

contacted the police, and a search team was gathered to look for the missing teenager. Although the weather condition was poor and the wind was still fierce, they didn't lose hope of finding Nicholas alive. However, they knew the clock was ticking, and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. The team split up, and one of the searchers who knew the area better decided to sweep a mountain trail he used to hike up.

The next day, Nicholas heard the sound of a snowmobile. He went out and followed the sound to find help. He had walked for about a mile when he heard someone calling his name. He moved towards the sound, and sure enough, a few minutes later, he came face to face with the searcher. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition, and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family.

【学生作品】

大雨续写作文(读后续写下水作文)(2)

大雨续写作文(读后续写下水作文)(3)

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