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【写作任务】
假如你很有计划，执行力也很强，在和你的美国朋友Jane分享了第一个新年计划之后，她表示对你的其他三个计划也很感兴趣。请根据所给提示，写一篇短文介绍你的另外三个计划，并说明你打算如何去做以及为什么这么做。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般将来时为主
人称：介绍自己新年打算做的事情时用第一人称。
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
本文要写三个新年计划，自然会使用与其语义相关的词项，如My resolution is ...，I am going to，It can help me ... 的表达。这也是一种衔接手段，即词义搭配。此外，文中连用4个be going to ... 结构，表示打算做某事，这是使用平行结构使文章衔接的手段，这样做能使文章节奏匀称、紧致。
4. 添佳句
Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者事竟成。
5. 成篇章
Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you.
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答案
2. 列提纲、写句子
(1) I am going to eat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports
(2) I am going to take up the same hobby as them
(3) I am going to care about my friends more and help them more
(4) I am going to listen more carefully in class and do my homework better
5. 成篇章
Hey, Jane! Here I want to share my other three resolutions with you.
My second resolution is about improving my physical health. I am going toeat more fruit and vegetables and play more sports because they are good for my health.
My third resolution is about improving my relationships with my family and friends. My parents both like tennis. I am going to take up the same hobby as them. Then I can often play tennis with them. Doing more things together will make us all happy. Also, I am going to care about my friends more and help them more. I hope we will have a better relationship.
My last resolution is about how to do better at school. I am going to listen more carefully in class and do my homework better. It can help me get better grades.
Well, where there is a will, there is a way. I'm sure I can achieve my resolutions if I try my best!
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初中英语写作指导（一）
初中英语写作指导（二）
初中英语写作指导（三）
初中英语写作指导（四）
初中英语写作指导（五）
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