Writing——电子邮件



[文体指导]

英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同,但略有差异。一般说来英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分:

1.标题栏

一般写在左上角,包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址、发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。

排列格式为:

FROM:发件人姓名、邮箱地址

DATE:发件日期

TO:收件人姓名、邮箱地址

SUBJECT:简明扼要地介绍信的内容。通常是单词、短语,偶尔用句子。

2.称呼

位于正文的开头。如何称呼,要看发件人与收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友,可以直呼其名;若是长辈或上级,要在姓氏前加上Mr,Miss,Mrs,Dr,Professor等表示称谓的词。

3.正文

正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后,就要开门见山地说明写信的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由,但对于电子邮件的回复,须紧扣“回复”这一字眼,要“问有所答,疑有所解”。在高考中,要按照试题要求的内容来写,最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理,语言要准确、流畅。

4.信尾客套话

结尾的客套话通常很简洁,如Yours,Thanks等,一般写在左下角。

5.签名

一般写在左下角,有时也写在右下角。

[亮点句式]

常见的开头方式:

表示高兴:I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your e­mail dated May 1st.

表示感谢:Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting e­mail.

表示关心与询问:How are you these days? /How are you getting on these days? /How are you getting on with your work/studies?

表示抱歉:I am sorry that I did not reply soon but I have been very busy these days.

表示遗憾:I was sorry to learn that you did not do well in the examination./I am so upset to hear that you are ill these days.

常用的结束语有:

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Please give my regards to your family.

Take good care of you and keep in touch.



[写作任务]

假如你是李华,你在新学校学习已两个多月,请根据下列提示,用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件,谈一谈你的高中生活。

1.介绍你的学校和班级;

2.你的作息时间;

3.你的同学;

4.你最喜欢的老师。

注意:可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

[审题谋篇]

体裁 记叙文

时态 一般现在时为主

主题 学校生活

人称 第一人称为主

结构 首段:提出写邮件目的;第二段:学校具体生活安排;第三段:作息安排。

[遣词造句]

Ⅰ.对接单元词汇

1.a well­known/famous school   一所著名的学校

2.amazing 令人惊讶的

3.get on/along well with sb. 与某人相处得好

4.way of teaching 教学方式

5.nothing like 完全不像

6.take part in after­class activities 参加课外活动

Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法

(一)完成句子

1.每间教室都有一台电脑和一个与电影院屏幕大小差不多的特殊屏幕。

Every room has a computer with a special screen,almost as big as a cinema screen.

2.我认为上她的课不会厌倦。

I don't think I will be bored in her class.

(二)句式升级

3.My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang.Ms Wang's way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.(用定语从句合并句子)

My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang,whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.

4.And there are sixty students in my class.They are all hard­working.(用定语从句合并句子)

And there are sixty students in my class,who are all hard­working.

[妙笔成篇]

【参考范文】

Dear Jane,

I've been at Senior High School for more than two months.I'm writing down my thoughts about my new school life.

My new school is a well­known school with a long history.There are 50 classes,more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school.The classrooms are amazing.Every room has a computer with a special screen,almost as big as a cinema screen.And there are sixty students in my class,who are all hard­working.I'm getting on very well with my classmates.My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang,whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.She usually tells us something in an interesting way.I don't think I will be bored in her class.

We usually get up at 6:30 and our class starts at 8:00.I always take part in colorful after­class activities and we go to bed at ten.

Bye for now!

Li Hua

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