第一节 应用文
邀请信写作三步走
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信,在写作时,语气要热情真挚,不要强人所难.
1、发出邀请
2. 活动内容(具体安排)
3. 再次邀请/期待回复
邀请信模板
Dear_________,(邀请对象)
How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you that there will be a _________(活动) at/in_________(时间).I wonder if you'd like to go with me.
The occasion will start at _________(具体时间)This will be followed by a_________.(进一步的安排)At around_________(时间),_________(另一个安排). If you are interested in it, let me know. Hope to meet you at the__________________./I really hope you can make it.(再次邀请)My phone number is_________(电话号码).
Looking forward to__________________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
常用篇首句
介绍自己,简要说明活动,并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School,the president of the Students’ Union.
我是来自育文学校的王明,学生会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日,在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我写信是邀请你......
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能来......
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很荣幸的邀请你......
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六,在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗?
篇中句
介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.下午,我们会一起......
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语,还是一个英语老师。我,代表我们学校,真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
篇尾句
期待对方接受邀请,并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期间你有空吗?请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗?
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
押题实战演练
(2022·云南·昭通市教育科学研究所模拟预测)假设你是李华,你校将举办中国传统文化展。请写封邮件邀请你的笔友Kevin参加,内容包括:
1.时间、地点;
2.活动安排;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写
外貌体型描写:
1.His sunburnt face and arms and his slim, strong body are just like those of millions of Chinese farmers, for whom he has struggled for the past five decades.
他那晒黑的脸、手臂和瘦长结实的身体,就像过去50年里他为之奋斗的数百万中国农民一样。
2.He's tall and handsome but with a pair of thick glasses.
他高大又英俊,但是戴着一副厚眼镜。
3.She has a round face and wide eyes.
她长着圆圆的脸,大大的眼睛。
4.He is a grayhaired thin old man.
他是一个白发苍苍的瘦老头。
5.She is of medium height and has a young and fresh look.
她中等身材,洋溢着青春、清新的气息。
6.It was an arresting face, pointed of chin, square of jaw.
那是一张很迷人的面容,尖下巴,方下颚。
7.Mr Darcy soon drew the attention of the room by his fine, tall person, handsome features, noble manners.
达西先生立刻引起全场的注意,因为他身材魁伟,容貌俊美,举止高贵。
8.He had a dark face, with stern features and a heavy brow.
他的脸庞黝黑,面容严厉,眉毛浓密。
9.He was a lad eighteen or nineteen years of age, small in build, with delicate features.
他是个十八九岁的瘦小青年,面部清秀。
情感描写之喜悦、兴奋
1.He is very happy and sweet. 他又高兴又甜蜜。
2.They didn't know what to do with themselves for joy. 他们高兴得不知道怎么办好。
3.He jumped for fun. 他高兴得跳了起来。
4.Her face brightened up. 她喜形于色。
好句欣赏:
1.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2.His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛因高兴而闪闪发亮。
3.I was wild with joy.我欣喜若狂。
4.I was pleased beyond description.我高兴得无法形容。
5.She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。
6.Her smile lit up the whole room.她的微笑照亮了整个房间。
7.She shed tears of joy.她流下了喜悦的眼泪。
8.She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
9.Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
10.I was floating on air.我飘飘欲仙。
情感描写之惊讶
1.I'm surprised to find you here. 在这里看到你我很奇怪。
2.It's nothing to be surprised about. 这不值得大惊小怪。
3.To my surprise, he didn't come yesterday. 令我吃惊的是他昨天没有来。
4.She looked at me in amazement. 她惊奇的看着我。
5.Her appearance fairly took my breath away. 她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。
6.Everyone looked at her in astonishment. 大家都惊讶地看着她。
押题实战演练
(2022·山东泰安·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I've lived in this neighborhood for years, but I still remember the first person I met when I moved here, and she was Linda pho had black wavy hair, big naughty eyes and a smile on her face all the time. I think she was about ten when I first met her.
She was very fond of trees and spent all her spare time collecting leaves and sticking them on a brochure. She remembered exactly where she had picked up a particular leaf, on which day and whether it was a sunny, windy or rainy day. Because I was interested in seeing what she had collected, I was her best friend or sister, Belle.
Later, Linda went to a boarding school outside the town. She would come home only during vacations. That is to say, we couldn't see each other as often as we used to. But we would make full use of every opportunity to visit the small forest near our home to collect her favorite leaves, and meanwhile, I could listen to her wonderful descriptions of the trees.
You must be wondering why I am talking about Linda. You see, something fantastic happened last week. I was standing on the balcony looking at the budding blossoms of the trees. As usual, I remembered Linda whom I had not seen for many years. Two years ago, I got some information from an old neighbor about Linda. She had settled down in France and had a daughter. I wondered whether she still stuck to her hobby of collecting leaves. I was so lost in thought that I did not hear that the doorbell rang at first. Then it rang again and again. Two short rings, one long ring and two short rings. Suddenly it dawned on me that it was how Linda used to ring the bell. I ran to the door.
注意:
1.写作词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
I opened the door and found “Linda” standing there.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:
“Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda's daughter”.
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参考答案:
1.Dear Kevin,
Learning that you are an enthusiastic fan of Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held at the Art Center in our school on February 1, 2022.
To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, varying from art, culture to history. The guide will interpret each piece in detail, from which you can benefit a lot. Additionally, some extraordinary paper-cutting and calligraphy works from students in our school will be on display. It is a good chance for you to gain a deeper insight into China.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Kevin写封邮件,邀请他参加你校将举办的中国传统文化展。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→take part in
帮助某人做某事:help sb. do sth.→assist sb. to do sth.
此外:additionally→in addition
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, varying from art, culture to history.
拓展句:To help students learn about the traditional Chinese culture, a wide selection of books, pictures, and handicrafts will be exhibited, which vary from art, culture to history.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that you are an enthusiastic fan of Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to participate in the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair to be held at the Art Center in our school on February 1, 2022. (运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The guide will interpret each piece in detail, from which you can benefit a lot. (运用了“介词 which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Paragraph 1:
I opened the door and found “ Linda ” standing there. The girl was with the same black wavy hair, the same big naughty eyes,and the same smile, and she held two brochures in her arms. She was about the same age when I had met Linda the first time. She couldn't be Linda! I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. I was sure the girl was her daughter.
Paragraph 2:
" Hello, Belle! I 'm Amy, Linda 's daughter ". What a wonderful surprise! Then Amy called out to someone hiding behind a tree, "Come out now. We have succeeded in surprising her"! Here came Linda. You cannot imagine the excitement we felt when we saw each other after so many years. That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and companionship.
【解析】
本文以人物线索展开,讲述了作者在搬新家后遇到的第一个人是Linda, 她有着黑色的卷发,调皮的大眼睛,脸上一直带着微笑。她把所有的业余时间都用来收集树叶并把它们贴在小册子上。作者和她成了很好的姐妹,一起在森林中度过了很多难忘的时光。后来多年未见Linda, 上周得到消息,Linda在法国定居了,并且有了一个女儿。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我打开门,看到“Linda”站在那儿。” 可知,第一段可描写作者仔细打量面前这个姑娘,虽然和记忆中的Linda很像,但年龄对不上。
②由第二段首句内容“你好, Belle! 我是 Amy, Linda的女儿。”可知,第二段可描写作者与Linda重聚,并一起去森林里拾落叶,重温友谊。
2.续写线索:打量——惊喜——重聚——捡落叶———感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类:
① 抱着: held sth in one’s arms / take sth in one’s hands
② 大声喊道: call out/shout/exclaim/yell
③ 捡落叶: pick up/ collect/ gather
情绪类:
① 惊喜 surprise /amazement
② 兴奋、激动 excitement / thrill
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. (宾语从句,定语从句)
[高分句型2] Here came Linda. (完全倒装)
[高分句型3] That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and companionship.(现在分词作伴随状语)
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