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Changes in People’s Diet

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to study the following table carefully and write according to the following outline a composition of no less than 120 words on the topic:Changes in People’s Diet. Your composition must be based on the information given in the table.

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Outline:

1.State the changes in people’s diet (饮食) in the past five years;

2.Give possible reasons for the changes;

3.Draw your own conclusion.

You should quote as few figures as possible.

【范文】

Changes in People’s Diet

As can be seen from the table, great changes have been taking place in people’s diet① over the period from 2000 to 2004. The consumption② of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high-energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing.

Why are there such changes in people’s diet? There are two major③ reasons, I think. Firstly, nowadays people become more wealthy and can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition④. Secondly, people now pay more attention to the quality of food rather than its quantity, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. Therefore, they try their best to improve the structure of their food.

From the above, we can see that people’s living level has been rising remarkably⑤ in the past five years. And we can also expect that there will be a more prosperous⑥ future waiting for us.

【注释】

①diet:饮食

②consumption:消费;消耗

③major:主要的

④nutrition:营养

⑤remarkably:明显地;显著地

⑥prosperous:繁荣的;繁华的

【点评】

本文是根据表格和数据提示展开的议论性说明文。这种题型的作文在过去的大学英语四级考试中出现过几次。

全文共分三段,围绕“人们饮食结构的改变”这个中心展开。

在第一段,作者结合图表所提示的内容,简要地说明了近五年来人们的饮食结构的变化——谷物的消费在递减,而高能量富营养食品的消费在不断增加。

在第二段,作者用提问的方式进行顺利过渡,并导出该段的主题——人们饮食结构改变的原因。之后,作者对此进行了逐步回答。论断中,Firstly, Secondly, Therefore等过渡性词语的使用使文章层次分明,脉络清楚。

在第三段,作者再根据提示中的第三点的要求,做出了自己的结论。

纵观全文,作者用词并不复杂,但就是用这些简单常见的词

语,对中心问题进行了透彻的说明,有理有据,层次分明。

资料来源:李华田主编《四级写作》,新大学英语四、六级考点透视丛书/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2006

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