托福写作和口语的评分标准一样吗（维诺教育的学生托福考试写作点评分享）

托福写作和口语的评分标准一样吗（维诺教育的学生托福考试写作点评分享）(1)

学生托福考试写作点评分享

独立写作及分段点评

I agree with this opinion about workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tests.To do during the workday, that when they do similar text, all day long.

首段点评：

语言使用：

1）名词性从句使用错误。about后面的宾语从句使用不当

2）句子残缺，句间的逻辑关系和连词没有。

3）意思表达不当，中式句子表达严重

结构：独立写作的首段缺少背景引入过度，观点表达句型没有针对文章的问题做出正面回答。

Nowadays, workers faced very boring work every day. They go to the company to facing some business. They always have trouble.And every trouble is a task.So they face many different types of text every day.If workers have many different types of tasks to do during the workday.They will like do with many kinds of taxt ,it’s equally.Workers went to the company day by day.And faced many kinds of tasks.If the text are always the same.They may feel very boring and upset.Or they lose their love and interest in their work.

本段点评

语言使用：

1）时态使用错误，一般现在时和一般过去时态使用有待提高。完成时态以及进行时的特殊用法此类高级时态没有。

2）情态动词使用错误

3）倒装句/非谓语以及从句的链接没有，此部分是高分作文必备，需要加深。

4）词汇重复率高，单调。boring-tedious—routine--/

5) 动词不定式的错误 to后面的动词原形误用成了doing

结构：

1）理由段落缺乏分论点，而且论据不充分。

2）这个例子不具备典型性

Any challenges you face in your work life are unknown.People are curious about unknown things .So when employees don't know what they're up against next. What is it when they will keep one. They will keep loving for this job, curiosity and exploration. they will take it seriously. Exploration will be more.

本段点评

语言使用：

1）词汇使用单调， face—be confronted with/ be stuck in dilemma.

2) 因果从句的用词单调, so的使用语境为口语，register的使用不当。

结构：

1）缺乏分论点和论据，不能做到顺序的承接

2）没有具有说服力的证据来完成论证。

So I agree with this opinion.

本段点评

语言使用：

1）不符合写作的语境。So ==As a result/ In a nutshell/In a word/ In consequence

2) 结尾段的三部分没有提及，只是单纯地给了一句简单的论述。