英语作文提分:常见句子错误之串句

串句是指错误地将两个独立的分句串在一起,不用连词或标点符号连接。最常见的问题在于直接用逗号“,”连接两个意思完整的句子。如果将逗号用于完整的独立句之间,便会产生串句。例:

Mike decided to stop smoking, he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

这个句子怎么修改,这里建议五种修改方法:

1. Mike decided to stop smoking, for he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

2. Mike decided to stop smoking because he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

3. Mike decided to stop smoking, not wanting to die of lung cancer.

4. Mike decided to stop smoking; he didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

5. Mike decided to stop smoking. He didn’t want to die of lung cancer.

英语作文如何设置范文(英语作文提分技巧)(1)

试着做做以下的练习吧:

Exercises: revise the run-ons

  • 1. I wanted badly to cry, however I remained cold and silent.
  • 改为:

    I wanted badly to cry; however, I remained cold and silent.

    I wanted badly to cry. However, I remained cold and silent

  • 2. A lot of men today get their hair styled, they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.
  • 改为:

    A lot of men today get their hair styled, and they use perfume and other cosmetics as well.

  • 3. In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards passing them was not easy.
  • 改为:

    In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards, for passing them was not easy.

    In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards because passing them was not easy.

    In order to become a nurse, I studied hard for my state boards. Passing them was not easy.

  • 4. The Christmas party was dull, Jane and I left at 9:30.
  • 改为:

    The Christmas party was dull, so Jane and I left at 9:30.

  • 5. People are worried about the future, they are especially concerned about the economy.
  • 改为:

    People are worried about the future, and they are especially concerned about the economy.

  • 6. I got up at 7 a.m., then I went to school.
  • 改为:

    I got up at 7 a.m., and then I went to school.

  • 7. The projector(放映机) broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed(发出嘶声表示不满), others shouted for a refund.
  • 改为:

    When the projector broke for a second time, some people in the audience hissed, and others shouted for a refund.

  • 8. Cindy found the movie disappointing Lee thought it was wonderful.
  • 改为:

    While Cindy found the movie disappointing, Lee thought it was wonderful.

    Cindy found the movie disappointing while Lee thought it was wonderful.

    英语作文如何设置范文(英语作文提分技巧)(2)

    注意:我们往往会把一些副词或短语、词组错认为是连词,从而使用它们来连接两个完整的意思。这些词包括:then, hence, therefore, however, as a result, consequently, what’s more等,当我们遇到这些词时,一定要记住它们并不是连词,不能用来连接句子。这些词的前面要么是“;”,要么是“.”,要么是加上一个连词如 “and”。,