文/刘宝彩/天津一网友考生提出“为什么英语作文就是写不好？”问题后，进一步问：“大家可以看看为什么我写的如下英语作文老师只给16分？”，题目是：Voice of Campus为题，写作原文如下：，我来为大家科普一下关于英语词汇搭配共现性原则例子?下面希望有你要的答案，我们一起来看看吧!
英语词汇搭配共现性原则例子
文/刘宝彩/天津
一网友考生提出“为什么英语作文就是写不好？”问题后，进一步问：“大家可以看看为什么我写的如下英语作文老师只给16分？”，题目是：Voice of Campus为题，写作原文如下：
“Dear school friends.
To enrich our school fife, we decide to start a school paper named Voice of Campus
There are many interesting parts ranging from Green Campus to Kaleidoscope of clubs in the paper. In Green Campus. we list some had phenomenons about throwing rubbish wasting foods, tooking down upon others and provide methods to prevent them ou can have a reading feast in Kaleidoscope of clubs，as the articles are written by our students who share their trips, their favourite music and so on.What's more, you can learn how to study in learning corner，where excellent students share their learning behaviors.
Our paper is open for all of you who have an interest in writing. You can hand in your campus stories to us. We are looking forward to your news stories as soon as possible. Thank you”
本文作者回答网友考生是：英语是逻辑思维语言，不是中文思维语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂。
所以写英语要“不靠中文思维靠逻辑”之方法才能写好英语作文，如此考生写作英语作文成绩提升得高分。
英语作文之所以不能用中文思维写，因为中文是发散思维，英文是逻辑思维。发散思维，就是平时说的，形散神不散，而英文没有形散神不散之说的。英语是型合意合的逻辑思维语言。所谓的型合意合，就是指表达出的英语既要符合英语句型，又要符合表达的意思。
英语写作的逻辑思维有四种方式①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果；其表达的基本形式是，以观点为中心，左找原因，右找结果。这样写出来的英语作文有骨有肉升分数。
网友考生表示从原因和结果两方面再审核一下写的英语作文，看看这两方面表达的是否充分。
网友考生说：“感觉简短文字太精辟了，出乎意料……”
根据“四种思维一形式”先看一下如下写作的英语作文，后看写作原理及其步骤。
一、英语逻辑思维写作英语文，其题目是：人要学会迈出第一步。
I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days. This fact comes to that I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.
By means of this, I get to know about great effort I should pay on working towards my goal with self-confidence. Combining with this, I would take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a workable action plan to see promising future in my career.
That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal as reached of mine. This, I was only to learn later.
二、看写作英语原理
英语是逻辑语言，不是中文思维语言，逻辑是英语的灵魂。所以写英语“不靠中文思维靠逻辑”，其表达基本形式——以提示观点句为中心，左找原因，右找结果，即：“原因句←提示观点句→结果句（ 达到结果应采取的措施 展望未来继续推理）”。英语为母语的人使用逻辑思维四方法，即：①一因一果，②一因多果，③多因一果，④多因多果。
三、看写作英语步骤
步骤㈠说出主题，提示观点句：I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days.
步骤㈡主题产生的原因:I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.
步骤㈢主题产生的结果: to pay great effort on working towards my goal with self-confidence.
步骤㈣达到这种结果应该采取什么措施
This helps me take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a three-point action plan to see promising future in my career.
步骤㈤展望未来，继续推理
That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal, in my belief, as reached of mine.
四、5个分步骤的各个句的汇总段落如下
I feel extremely positive of stepping forward bravely in the beginning, that becomes crucial for the success of a plan to be implemented in coming days. This fact comes to that I would achieve only one ambition in a career that proves difficultly successful.
By means of this, I get to know about great effort I should pay on working towards my goal with self-confidence. Combining with this, I would take special measures, in an attempt by me to make a workable action plan to see promising future in my career.
That brings me to get motivated in the possible business kept a rise in potentially-financial profit, enabling my employees to live happily. This arises from the positively-developmental psychology to take the newly-beginning step towards my realistically- ambitious goal as reached of mine. This, I was only to learn later.
总结：
大考考生要遵循：“不靠‘形散神不散’思维而靠‘型合意合’思维”之理念，写作英语作文，才能把英语作文写得与众不同，才能让大考英语判阅卷老师给考生——升档次提分数得高分甚至满分。
英语逻辑思维写作可以彻底解决：“为啥英语作文就是写不好”之问题。
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