中西方应为思维习惯理念不同，在写作时表达相似但意义却差别很大，如果在托福写作中套汉语思维，就是中式化英语的表现这只能使文章语言蹩脚、冗赘所以考生在平时阅读英语材料和练习写作时，要注意英语表达和汉语表达的差别，切忌在写作中硬套汉语思维，造成笑话并失分，下面我们就来聊聊关于托福综合写作特点和难点解析?接下来我们就一起去了解一下吧!
托福综合写作特点和难点解析
中西方应为思维习惯理念不同，在写作时表达相似但意义却差别很大，如果在托福写作中套汉语思维，就是中式化英语的表现。这只能使文章语言蹩脚、冗赘。所以考生在平时阅读英语材料和练习写作时，要注意英语表达和汉语表达的差别，切忌在写作中硬套汉语思维，造成笑话并失分。
1.Original: If we agree to say that school offers us the best book knowledgeacquisition
then our society offers us the best surviving techniques in a hard way.
Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition ofbook
knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for acquiring commonsense or “ street smarts” .
Agree to say that 表达中式化，只需要 agree that 即可;thebest book knowledge acquisition改为 the best method for the acquisitionof book knowledge(学校给我们提供了获取书本知识的最好方法)更为恰当，同样，后面的 the best surviving techniques 改为 thebest method foracquiring common sense...;加上 street marks(街头智慧)给文章的词汇增添色彩。
2. Original: They can spendmore time studying education and communication to improve
their role as a mother, wifes and daughter.
Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, educationthemselves, in order
to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters.
原句中 studying education and communication 的说法中式化，不符合英语的表述，应该
为 studying， educating themselves。除了词语表达，此句中还存在其他问题，如名词单复数的使用：不是提高他们的角色，而是提高他们自身以扮演好母亲角色。还有，女性不止一个人。很多人都在扮演母亲角色， role 和mother 应用复数，故将 improvetheir role as a mother改为 improve themselves in their roles asmother;同样，为保持一致， wife 和daughter 也可用复数，原文中 wife 的复数写法有误，应该是 wives。
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