作文复习的正确打开方式
要背诵到走进考场前的最后一刻。拿到作文务必读三遍,找出体裁、话题和内容要求,尤其是其中的“名、动、形、副”四类词,然后结合背诵的功能句和题干关键词写作文,尽量写背诵过的表达。
记住:多篇作文中重复性表达是复习的重中之重,因为这些词汇、表达或句式可以使用在近十多次考试中,那么,就很有可能再次成为你写译提分的利器。
如果只是看看,你是不可能记得住,更不可能熟练使用其中的表达,因此建议你按照这个姿势背写作文。
抄写英文---英译汉---汉译英---对比查错---有针对性地背写出错或差异之处---背写全文
最后,务必看一眼作文后面的话题词预测,你可以不记这些单词的拼写,但应该知道他们的意思,因为他们可能就是这次的作文主题词(也可能在翻译中出现),将话题词和功能句结合即可完成写作。如果记不住,首先保证认识即可。
(文中同义替换的表达,请自行选择背写。)
首段:图画描述
(引入图画)This/There/It/Given is a simple/funny but thought-provoking/enlightening cartoon/picture/drawing. (图画描述:人/物 动作 环境 文字) the youngster/guy/boy/child/son expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”. To his surprise/shock, his father points at the dustbin, telling him that if he can empty the dustbin there, he can do anything.
二段:图画主题 现象 意义
(图画主旨) This picture/cartoon/drawing, obviously/apparently, can be naturally associated with/linked to the critical importance/significance of doing small things. (主题评论) That is to say/To be specific, if youngsters intend to/want to/dream to/aim to/target to achieve success, it is advisable/ sensible/ vital/ indispensable/ necessary/ intelligent/ wise/ well-advised for them to begin/start with little jobs. (现象概述) In the contemporary/present-day society, it has become a trend for a host of/a large number of/ quite a few teenagers/young people to ignore/neglect tiny things in life, such as cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. (相关人 感受) Meanwhile/In the meantime/, an increasing number of/a growing number of young people find it rather useless or unnecessary to deal with these things.(举例) A case in point/A typical example is the boy in the picture. However/Nonetheless/Whereas, (意义) it is these small tasks that enable/help/ensure/render youngsters to accumulate/ build up/ master/ gain/ obtain/ acquire adequate/sufficient/ ample precious/valuable knowledge, ability/capacity/competence, skills and experience. (万能总结) Intelligent/Wise/rational people in large numbers, as a matter of fact/in fact/ actually, have come to realize/recognize/be aware of the vital/critical significance of these small things.
(补充举例2)Just taking a look around, we can notice/see/find a great many young people like the boy in the picture.
(意义句补充) Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our enthusiasm/ passion for success, and helps us to make progress.
尾段:观点 建议 展望
(观点:尾段首句万能) I, as a college student, am convinced that it is of great necessity/it is exceedingly necessary for youngsters to enhance/strengthen/improve/boost our overall/comprehensive quality by doing small things. (万能建议) Thus/Hence/Accordingly/As a result, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to cultivate/foster/ develop this positive awareness and habit. (展望1:)We, trying our utmost to do so/sparing no efforts to do so, may witness/see a hopeful and promising future of our life/work/study. (展望2:) Do bear in mind: small progress every day leads to a big success./We should bear/keep in mind that a big success comes from/originates from /stems from everyday small progress.
(功能句的顺序,请随意调整支配,记得用不上的句子就直接放弃,只写会写会用能写对的表达)
相关话题词汇拓展
勤奋diligence n. /diligent adj.
耐心 patience n./patient adj.
尊老爱幼respect the old and care for the young
创新Innovation
感谢Gratitude/ appreciation
美德virtue
谨慎prudence
挫折与坎坷twists and turns
逆境setbacks
成功无捷径there is no shortcut to success
终身学习life-long study
从小事做起Start from Small Details
幽默感A Sense of Humor
沟通Communication
身心健康Physical and Mental Health
捐献Donation
爱国主义Patriotism
信念Conviction
奉献 Contributions
梦想 Ambitions
勤奋Diligence
耐心Patience
成功Success
机遇Opportunity
挑战Challenge
勤俭节约Thrifty
创新Innovation
拼搏精神The Determined Spirit
奉献精神The Dedication Spirit
自信Self-Confidence
诚实Honesty
谦虚Modesty
奋斗Strive
团队精神&合作Teamwork Spirit & Cooperation
竞争Competition
社会公德Public Morality
责任Responsibility
美丽Beauty
和谐社会Harmonious Society
打好基础的重要性The Importance of Fundamentals/Basic Skills
「英语学习万能素材举例时用
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话题:On English Learning
内容要求(提纲):
1. 英语很重要
2. 学习英语中的困难
3. 如何学好英语
【参考范文】
In the contemporary world, it is of great significance for youngsters to learn English well and thus, English learning has gained great popularity. Based on a survey, a majority of international organizations or firms acknowledge that they prefer recruiting employees who can speak English fluently.
However, a host of English learners may have a variety of difficulties or troubles in learning. For instance, a large number of students find it difficult to memorize new words. Frequently, it is also difficult for them to understand rules of English grammar. In addition, though some are good at reading or writing, they fail to express themselves freely in oral English.
Then, how to get a good command of this language? I am convinced that practice makes perfect. Only practice can help me to master grammatical knowledge and remember new words. And it is also through practice that I can speak and write fluently, and there is no other way. I deem that if I try my utmost to practice English every day, the future of my English learning will be promising and hopeful. (179words)
译文:
在当今世界,年轻人学好英语很重要,因此英语学习受到普遍欢迎。根据一项调查,绝大多数国际组织或公司承认他们更偏爱招聘英语流利的员工。
然而,很多英语学习者可能在学习中有诸多困难或麻烦。例如,很多学生发现很难背会生词。他们也经常很难理解语法规则。此外,尽管一些学生擅长读写,但未能使用口语流利表达自我。
那么,如何学好这门语言。我相信熟能生巧。只有练习实践能有助于掌握语法规则同时背会单词。也正是通过实践我能在说和写方面变得流利,别无他法。如果我全力去每天练习,未来我的英语学习将充满希望。
相关话题词汇拓展
悲观心态Pessimistic Mind
乐观心态Optimistic Mind
珍惜时间Cherishing Time
死读书Study in a Rigid Way
失学Dropping Out of School
熟能生巧Practice Makes Perfect
读书的快乐The Pleasure of Reading
应试教育 Test-oriented Education System
面试前的准备Preparation for the Interview
助学贷款Students’ Loans
正确择业 Choosing the Right Career
能力Ability/competence
知识Knowledge
自律Self-Discipline
无目标的Aimless
大学生就业难It’s Difficult for University Students to Look for Jobs
只注重考试成绩Exam-Oriented Education
「科技与现代生活 」Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment on kids’ understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 but no more than 180 words.
【试题解析】
阅卷发现:很多同学写只写了“手机对学生的影响”,但其实不然。通过审题可以发现,如果只写“手机对学生的影响”则有跑题的嫌疑;因为本文体裁要求为“essay”,话题为“kids’ understanding of going to school”,即“孩子对上学的理解”。所以,本文应该写到“手机”,但如果未涉及“孩子对上学的理解”则有跑题的嫌疑。
建议各位准备四级考试的同学,对待任何作文的审题,都应该关注题干中的“名、动、形、副”四类词,只要围绕这四类词展开作文的写作,即可大大降低跑题的可能性。
【写作提纲】
首段:图画描述
二段:图画联系主旨 上学的意义 手机学习的不足
尾段:观点 建议
【参考范文】
This is a simple, funny but enlightening cartoon, in which a mother is sending her son to go to school. However, to her surprise, the youngster responds, “Why am I going to school if my phone knows everything?”
Evidently, this picture can be naturally associated with kids’ incorrect understanding of going to school. As a college student, I deem that it is of great necessity for any teenagers to enhance their comprehensive quality and competence by attending school. In the contemporary society, if youngsters intend to be talents, it is advisable for them to acquire not only knowledge, but also cooperation, diligence and communicative skills. However, today, it has become a trend for a host of students to gain diverse information through cell phones or computers. Meanwhile, a growing number of teenagers find it convenient and efficient to learn with the help of phones. But, it is also cell phones that lead many students to misunderstand or even ignore the essence of education. A case in point is the guy in the picture.
Do bear in mind: education does not merely mean “knowing everything”. Thus, parents and teachers should educate and encourage their kids to cultivate this awareness. (198 words)
【参考译文】
这是一幅简单、好玩但有启发性的图画。图画中,一个妈妈正要送自己的儿子去上学,然而使她意外的是,小孩回应道:“如果我手机什么都知道了,我为什么还要去上学?”
显然,这个图片能自然联系到孩子们对上学的不正确理解。作为一名大学生,我相信任何年轻人很有必要通过接受学校教育来提升自身的素质和能力。在当今社会,如果年轻人想要成为人才,他们应该获取知识,还应该获取合作、勤奋和沟通技能。然而,今天,很多学生从手机或计算机获取各种有用的信息,这已经成为一种趋势。同时,越来越多的青少年发现在手机的帮助下学习也变得方便高效。但是,也正是手机导致很多学生错误理解甚至忽视了教育的本质。一个典型例子就是图片中的男孩。
牢记:教育不简单意味着“知道一切”。因此,父母和老师应教育和鼓励他们的孩子培养这种意识。
相关话题词汇拓展
分享经济 sharing economy
共享汽车 car sharing
共享单车 bike/ bicycle sharing
扫码解锁单车 scan the QR code to unlock a bike
违规停车 illegal parking
停放点 parking lot/area
出境游 outbound trips/ oversea traveling
免税店 duty-free shop
海外购物 overseas shopping
移动支付 mobile payment
科技创新宝地 best place for science and innovation
高铁 high-speed train
动车 bullet train
假日购物季 holiday shopping season
收入分配 income distribution
市场经济market economy
人工智能 artificial intelligence,
过滤软件 filtering software
流氓软件 hooligan software
销售任务 sales target
私人汽车 private cars
大众传媒负面影响 the negative influence of mass media
一次性塑料袋 disposable plastic bags
全球化 globalization
一带一路倡议the Belt and Road Initiative
发挥潜能 fulfill one’s potential
提升效率 improve the efficiency
「图表作文范例学历与收入
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
首段:图表描述
(引出图表)This chart is provided by US Bureau of Labor and it is simple but enlightening. (图表描述万能) In 2010, it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, other individuals could not enjoy satisfactory earnings, if they did not receive better education.
二段:主题评论 现象 意义
(图表联系主题)Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of education: (图表内容评论)if individuals intend to acquire/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. (现象)In the contemporary America, it is a common phenomenon for a host of companies/ firms/ corporations/ organizations to hire/ employ/ recruit doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. (相关人 感受) And an increasing number of youngsters find it rather difficult to get better jobs, if they do not get better education. (意义) It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. (总结)As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.
尾段:观点 号召
(观点)As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. (号召)We should bear in mind that education is/means a worthy investment.
相关话题词汇拓展
就业与失业 employment and unemployment
诚信/不诚实 honesty and dishonesty
自助者天助之 God helps those who help themselves.
充分准备 full/ adequate preparation
追求&收获 pursuits & rewards
有志者事竟成 Where there is a will, there is a way.
适应社会发展 adapt to the social development
终身学习life-long/life-time study
素质教育 quality-oriented education
应试教育 test-oriented education system
面试前的准备preparation for the interview
理论与实践 theory and practice
为人师表 to be a model
学业成就 academic achievement
课外活动 extracurricular activity
课程表 curriculum schedule
必修课 compulsory course
学生会 Student’s Union =Student Union
名牌大学 prestigious university
「书信作文范例 」Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【试题解析】
审题时,务必关注“体裁、话题、内容要求”。只要肯仔细看题,即可发现:体裁要求为“letter”,内容要求为“express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement”。因此,写作话题为感谢信,重点围绕题干中“名、动、形、副”四种词展开写作即可保证作文不跑题。
【写作提纲】
首段:写信目的,并致谢
中间段:写难忘的一次成功(如英语比赛、英语考试好成绩)
尾段:再次致谢并祝愿
【参考范文】
Dear parents,
Today, I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you, because I made a memorable achievement in recent English Speech Competition.
During my high school study, I had a variety of difficulties in English learning. For instance, I had great trouble in memorizing new words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to understand rules of English grammar. Though I could write and read, I could not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you encouraged me to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. It was constant practice that enabled me to build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence in making speeches in English. Finally, I succeeded in this competition. Your encouragement brought me power, aroused my enthusiasm for English and helped me to make progress every day.
As your child, I deem that suppose I intend to achieve greater success in future, it is advisable for me to set a greater goal. You make me believe that if I try my utmost to do everything, the future of my life will be hopeful and promising. Thanks again, my dear parents!
Your kid
Sky
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