爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家分享1个雅思口语Part 2话题（题目来源：剑16）的高分语料。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，雅思口语Part 2高分语料
2，Mac点评
3，语料解析
- IELTS Speaking Part 2 -
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Describe a tourist attraction you enjoyed visiting.
You should say:
- What this tourist attraction is
- When and why you visited it
- What you did there
And explain why you enjoyed visiting this tourist attraction.
（题目来源：剑16）
The tourist attraction I enjoyed visiting is Huangshan or in English, Yellow Mountain.
It sits in the south of Anhui province and it’s one of the most well-known mountains in China.
Me and an Indian couple I’m friends with visited there a few years back.
The reason why we decided to check out Huangshan was because I'd never been there and because they had heard a lot about it.
We stayed in a boutique hotel in a small town just a stone’s throw away from Huangshan.
With the anticipation of realizing our dream, we got up very early and jumped onto a local bus taking us to the foot of the hill.
At the entrance, there was this interesting warning sign that read: If you take the cable car, it will take 10 minutes to get to the top. If you walk, it’ll take at least 3 hours. My friends and I opted for hiking all the way to the top.
The walk was pretty idyllic at first. Everywhere there are hundred-year-old or more trees stretching into the sky, offering shade to the hikers. Besides tourists, we also saw some very well-tanned guys with a shoulder pole carrying goods to shops and hotels in the hills, which were probably over the weight of their own… but they were faster than us! I marveled at their stamina and fitness compared to our own.
Halfway up, our walk turned into a ‘climb’ because the steps became steeper, and the path was narrower. We had to stop constantly to drink water. However, the picturesque landscape along the way was worth it.
We also saw hill ranges as far as the eye can see covered in clouds. We were all engaged in feasting our eyes on the view, committing it to memory.
I definitely enjoyed the Huangshan trip and I hope to visit there again.
Mac 点评：
- Grammar: 8
- Vocabulary: 8
- Fluency & Coherence: 8 (Fluency could have more rhythm and could have been at a faster pace)
- Pronunciation (& Intonation): 8 (Pronounced the word 'worth' incorrectly; intonation could have been more expressive.)
Standard phrases:
- The tourist attraction I enjoyed visiting is
- The reason why
Vocabulary (and colloquialisms) 高分的词汇和短语：
- sits in 坐落于
- in the south of 在……南部
- province 省
- one of the most well-known 最著名的……之一
- just a stone’s throw away from 很近
- With the anticipation of 怀着对……的期待
- jumped onto (a bus) 登上（公交车）
- the foot of the hill 山脚下
- opted for 选择
- idyllic 诗情画意的
- stretching into the sky 高耸入云
- marveled at 惊叹
- stamina 毅力；耐力
- fitness 健壮
- steep 陡峭的
- narrower 更窄
- picturesque landscape 风景如画
- feasting our eyes on the view 把美景尽收眼底
- committing it to memory 刻进记忆里
Coherence 展示“流利性与连贯性”的词汇和短语:
- it
- and it’s one of
- a few years back
- was because
- I’d never been there
- because
- , which
- And
- From
- Since
- With…, we
- At the entrance, there
- That
- If…, it
- all the way to
- Everywhere
- Besides
- Probably
- but they
- faster than
- their
- compared to
- turned into
- because
- became more
- However
- One
- also
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