Unit 78 Keeping a Diary in English

studyabroad英语作文120词(高考命题作文78Keeping)(1)

以“Keeping a Diary in English”为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。

“范文”

Keeping a Diary in English

There are many ways to improve our English writing skills① and keeping a diary in English is one of them.

Keeping a diary in English is not so difficult as some students imagine②. Compared with③other forms of writing, it is shorter and takes less time. In doing it, we often find a lot of pleasure. Because our life is rich and colorful, it is easy for us to choose one or two events④ to write down.

Then how to keep a diary in English? first, we need a notebook and a Chinese-English dictionary. Then we should drop down⑤ briefly⑥ in English what we have done and what we have been thinking during the day. We can make it a rule to write the diary before going to bed⑦. It is really helpful to improve our English writing skills.

“注释:”

①skill:n.技能,技巧

②imagine:vi.想象

③compared with:与……相比较

④event:n.事件(情)

①drop down:记下

②briefly:adv.简单地

③go to bed:上床睡觉

“点评:”

这是一篇根据命题展开的说明性议论文。这种题型应作为备考题型加以训练。它既考查学生的思维能力,又考查学生组织语言进行表达的能力。

本篇作文提示材料只有一个题目,“Keeping a Diary in English”,这就给大家很大的发挥余地,整篇文章只要围绕“用英语写日记”这个中心展开,从哪些方面着手呢?本文的框架如下文所示:

第一段作者开门见山地表达了自己的观点:用英语写日记是提高英语水平写作能力的一种方式。

第二段作者剖析了用英语写日记并不象有些学生认为的那么难,与其它形式相比,日记短小,写作占用时间少,其中有许多乐趣。

最后,作者用“Then how to keep a diary in English?”承前启后,自然地过渡到第三段。在这一段,作者告诉大家具体怎么做,并用first, then等词过渡来表达自己的观点。最后一句“It is really helpful to improve our English writing kills”与文章开头遥相呼应。

资料来源:英语作文高分必背丛书:高考/李华田主编,武汉大学出版社,2005

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