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在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货
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你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个【生活类话题】的雅思大作文真题的范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
- 题目改述
- 讨论 观点类大作文高分句型
- 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
- 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题：
In many countries, more and more people buy a wider range of household goods like televisions, microwave ovens, and rice cookers. Do you think this has more pros than cons?
审题：
- Type: Discuss & Opinion 讨论 观点 (我的观点：more pros)
- Body 1: damage to the environment, waste of resources
- Body 2: brings greater convenience, good for the economy
- Key words: buy a wider range of, this has more pros than cons
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
2022年雅思外教范文#12：家用电器越买越多，利弊是什么？（含音频）
▲范文音频戳这里▲
In many nations, the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands for a higher quality life have led to a growth in domestic appliances. This push towards increased convenience, though it may damage the environment and can be seen as a waste of resources, seems clear in my opinion, to have brought more benefits than negatives.
One of the often-touted drawbacks of consumerism is the negative effect it has on the environment, particularly in relation to non-durable goods such as home appliances. By possessing a variety of these appliances, such as blenders and ovens, for which have limited life-spans, many of these machines will find themselves in dumps, unrecycled, and bleeding toxins into the surrounding natural environment. It is also commonly cited that by having so many choices, and by having a supposed need for so many of these machines, that we are squandering our natural resources simply for the pleasure of enjoying so called ‘home-conveniences’. In both cases, however, future technology will most likely help solve these issues.
In any case, and despite such arguments, it is without doubt that the benefits from owning these appliances can bring a plethora of positive benefits. One of the most important is that they provide people with convenience, liberating regular citizens from laborious and trivial domestic chores. A simple example of this is the robotic floor sweeper, which compared to the time before such a gadget, allows one to maintain a clean home without the need to put time aside for cleaning, and thus frees up the person to do other tasks. This demand for convenience also has a positive impact, amongst others, on the economy, since as people’s expectations for a less arduous lifestyle increases, so does the need for manufacturing output.
In conclusion, although I believe there are potential drawbacks to the multitude of manufactured household goods on the market, the problems associated with owning such devices will fade into obscurity once the advancement of technology makes them more environmentally friendly, and so in the meantime, I also believe the overriding boon they bring is greater.
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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:
- In many countries = In many nations
- more and more people buy a wider range of = the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands
- household goods = domestic appliances (televisions, microwave ovens, rice cookers, etc)
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文高分句型：
- This…, seems clear in my opinion, to have brought more benefits than negatives.
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
- led to
- This
- , though it
- and can be seen as
- , seems clear
- , to
- than
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- disposable income 可支配收入
- burgeoning demands 快速增长的需求
- domestic appliances 家用电器
- push towards 推动
- a waste of resources 资源浪费
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
- cons (because I think pros are greater) — environment and waste of resources
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
- One of the…is
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- often-touted 经常被吹捧的
- drawbacks 缺点
- consumerism 消费主义
- non-durable goods 非耐用品
- home appliances 家电
- a variety of 各种各样的；形形色色的
- limited life-spans 有限的使用周期
- dump (n) 垃圾场；废物堆
- unrecycled 不可回收
- bleeding toxins into the surrounding natural environment 释放有害物质，污染周边环境
- commonly cited 常提到的
- squandering 浪费；挥霍
- ‘home-conveniences’ 便利之家
- future technology 未来科技
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- is
- , particularly in relation to
- such as
- By possessing
- these
- , such as
- , for which
- , many of these
- find themselves
- , and
- It is also
- that by having…, and by having
- for
- , that we
- simply for
- In both cases, however
- solve these
- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：
- pros: convenience and good for the economy
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
- In any case, and despite such arguments, it…
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- a plethora of 大量的；过多的
- liberating 解放
- laborious 辛苦的；费力的
- trivial 琐碎的
- domestic chores 家务
- robotic floor sweeper 扫地机器人
- gadget 小工具；小设备
- put time aside 节约时间
- frees up 释放；腾出
- people’s expectations for 对……的期待
- arduous 费力的；费劲的
- manufacturing output 制造业产出
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- without doubt that
- the benefits from
- these
- can bring
- One of the most important is that they
- , liberating
- this
- , which compared to
- the time before such
- , allows one
- without the need to
- , and thus
- other
- This
- also
- , amongst others,
- , since as
- , so does
- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
- In conclusion,
- I believe…, I also believe
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- potential 潜在的
- the multitude of 众多的
- manufactured household goods 制造的家用产品
- on the market 在市场上
- the problems associated with 与……相关的问题
- fade into obscurity 消失；消除
- the advancement of technology 科技进步
- environmentally friendly 对环境友好的
- overriding 凌驾于
- boon 好处；益处
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- , although
- there
- , the
- such
- once
- them
- , and so in the meantime,
- They
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